Children who write good sentences often lose the polish at the last step: punctuation. Two habits show up again and again in P4–P6 compositions — the 'one comma to the end' paragraph where every sentence is joined by 逗号, and dialogue where the quotation marks, commas and colons land in the wrong places. Neither is hard once the child knows the few rules involved. This post gives those rules, original examples, and a 10-minute checking routine.
Habit 1: Stop the 'one comma to the end' paragraph
A 逗号 marks a short pause inside a sentence; a 句号 marks that a complete thought is finished. A child who cannot hear the difference tends to write one very long run with commas only. The fix is to read the paragraph aloud and ask at every comma: 「说到这里,一件事说完了吗?」 If the answer is yes, that is where a 句号 belongs.
| Read-aloud question | What it tells you |
|---|---|
| Did one complete thing just get said? | Use 句号 (。) |
| Is the second half still needed to finish the thought? | Keep 逗号 (,) |
| Are these items of the same kind in a list? | Use 顿号 (、) between them |
Original example. Before: 「早上我起床以后刷牙洗脸,吃完早餐就出门,路上遇到了同学,我们一起走到学校,老师已经在教室里了。」 After: 「早上我起床以后刷牙洗脸,吃完早餐就出门。路上遇到了同学,我们一起走到学校。老师已经在教室里了。」 The words did not change; the reader can now breathe.
Habit 2: Get dialogue punctuation right
Dialogue brings in 引号 and 冒号, and this is where marks go astray most often. The standard rules (see Sources) come down to three patterns, depending on where the words of 'he said' sit:
| Pattern | Original example |
|---|---|
| Speaker first — use 冒号, then the quote | 妈妈说:“今天早点睡。” |
| Speaker after — the quote ends with 逗号 inside the quotes | “今天早点睡,”妈妈说。 |
| Speaker in the middle — comma, speaker, comma, then the rest | “今天,”妈妈说,“早点睡。” |
Two more points. When the quoted words are a question or an exclamation, keep the 问号 or 感叹号 inside the quotes even if the speaker comes after: 「“你吃饭了吗?”妈妈问。」 And a new speaker normally starts a new line, so the reader can tell who is talking without reading a label every time.
Habit 3: Leave the quote marks to the quote
A child sometimes puts 引号 around a word simply to make it look important. Quotation marks are for words actually spoken, words quoted from somewhere else, or a term being pointed at on purpose. If the child cannot say who spoke or what is being quoted, the marks are probably not needed.
A 10-minute punctuation check
- 2 minutes: pick one paragraph from the child's own recent composition and read it aloud at normal speed, marking every place the voice naturally stops completely.
- 3 minutes: compare those stops with the 句号 actually written; fix every missing or extra 句号.
- 3 minutes: find each line of dialogue and name which of the three patterns it uses; correct any colon, comma or quotation mark that does not match.
- 2 minutes: copy one corrected sentence into the 错题本 with the rule written beside it.
Where a school teacher teaches a slightly different convention, follow the school's version, and ask if you are unsure. Punctuation conventions in print can vary a little, so use the rules above as a checking guide, not a final authority.
What a parent can do without reading Chinese
Ask the child to read a paragraph aloud and tap the table each time they stop fully. Then count the 。 marks on the page. If the voice stopped five times and the page shows one 。, the child will see the gap immediately — no Chinese required.
Write a short paragraph with a line of dialogue, then check every 。and every quotation mark before you submit it for feedback.
Try composition feedbackCatch run-on sentences by ear. Read next:
Read-Aloud (朗读) Method →Fix broken sentences, not just marks. Read next:
Fixing 病句 →Sources
- The dialogue patterns follow the national standard 《标点符号用法》 (GB/T 15834-2011); check the school's own conventions where they differ.
- Word and usage questions should be checked against a standard dictionary such as 《现代汉语词典》 or the school's materials.
- The checking routine is the author's own tutoring practice, offered as a suggestion and not a promise of any result.
- All example sentences are original and illustrative.
- This post does not describe any exam format, mark allocation, frequency or prediction; check seab.gov.sg for official information.